On going back and reading "The Road to Hell ('s kitchen)", parts one and two , I think it taught me a lesson.
Don't do accents. At least, don't try to write accents. I guess it's o.k. to describe an accent, but trying to phonetically put it down is a pain. I looked back and saw quite a few parts of this simple, short, story where I really jacked it up. Imagine if the story were longer.
Or, I had actually went back and edited it better =)
Anyway, lesson learned.