Monday, July 28, 2014

Staying In Character

I've been thinking of doing this for a while, so I guess now is a good a time as any. A brief character sketch.....emphasis on "sketch"....for one of the protagonists of my ongoing project, Last Chance. It's sort of a mixture of The Avengers and The Wild, Wild, West.

Nothing really to do with the character (besides the Steampunk angle), but just thought it was a cool pic
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Alistair (Albert Muldoon, in the States) Moore: A British expatriate on the run from the law for a crime he didn't commit. Deciding to use his knowledge of steam technology to fight crime, he poses as a 'Yankee' sheriff by day and a masked vigilante by night.

Born and raised in London, Alistair's father was an up and coming stage magician and his mother, a very capable escape artist and magician's assistant. He was raised in the wings of the stage and picked up various tricks of the trades from not only his father, but from visiting magicians, as well. By the age of 17, he was almost as good a magician as his father, though lacking the flair for the dramatic. His lack of dramatic flair was due, partly, in his grounding in scientific endeavors. A prodigy from a young age, he began working with the odd technology known as "Steam Tek" as soon as he was able.  

One night, while walking home from one of his father's performances, Alistair heard struggling in a nearby alleyway. Always one to do what was right, he investigated and found an abnormally large, brutish man mauling a young lady. Approaching the man from behind, Alistair hit him with a lead pipe he found lying against a building. The shock of the impact ran up his arms as he struck hard, waiting for the man to fall flat on his face. Instead, the man slowly turned to confront Alistair....a smile on his face. He quickly backhanded the young lady, caving her skull in before knocking Alistair across the length of the alley. Before the haze of unconsciousness took him, he saw the large man take the lead pipe and dip the tip of it into the oozing ichor of the girl's skull, then throwing it next to Alistair's, now limp, form. 

The next thing he knew he awoke in a jail cell, having been charged with the murder of a young prostitute. What was worse, they had an eye witness.....a frail, thin, and respected, doctor....a Dr. Jekyll...who had seen the whole thing. Not knowing what had really happened, he knew one thing for certain. He didn't want to be around when English law played this scenario out. Using skills he picked up from his parents, Alistair escaped and managed to grab some money he had been saving to open his own steam tek shop. Hopping a freighter to a "land of opportunity", Alistair made his way to the "colonies", then to Wyoming where he stumbled upon "Last Chance".

Ole' Alistair still needs a lot of work as well as a lot of fleshing out, but it's a start.

11 comments:

Alex J. Cavanaugh said...

Good name for him. I'm guessing he encountered Mr. Hyde.

Maurice Mitchell said...

I love steampunk and superheroes so this is the best of both worlds Mark.

Robin said...

This is good, Mark. I love your premise.

Elizabeth Seckman said...

I think it sounds good. I think you have put quite a lot of meat on his character bones!

Jack said...

That is brilliant. I would read the book for just him at this point!

mail4rosey said...

The reading here is fun. I hope the writing was fun too. :)

Susan Gourley/Kelley said...

Very cool premise. Tell us more.

Mark Means said...

@Alex: Hey! Who told you?? :P

@Maurice: Same here! They always say, "Write the book you want to read", so....

@Robin: Thank you and I hope to have more soon.

@Elizabeth: Thanks and I have to make sure not to "over feed" him :)

@Jack: Wow, thank you. I do appreciate that.

@Rosey: It is and, hopefully, with more to come. Thanks!

@Susan: I'm working on a write up for my "Projects" page...stay tuned.

L. Diane Wolfe said...

You have a great background story for him.

Lisa said...

Okay, I was drawn in already, just in your description. Sounds intriguing Mark! Especially all the stuff you left out!

klahanie said...

Hey Mark,

Dude, you can stop twiddling your thumbs! :) Yep, I have finally arrived.

Hey, he got to Wyoming. That's a Last Chance, I reckon :) Nicely enticing, good sir.

Gary :)

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